Talk:Chapter 1 (T:NB)/@comment-31244753-20191111213519

good first chapter, the characters are well written you can feel with the description of the characters very quickly really immersive equi. Composed the separate two-part chapter with 3 interesting plot. Life style, brendan group prob and hayllee was the right thing to do.

The only thing that could have hurt me would surely be the devotion of the person of Peter who for me could have lasted a little longer.

8/10