Board Thread:Community Discussion/@comment-24596982-20190731202901/@comment-25361981-20190731213446

KeepOnKeepingOn wrote: Thibo1102 wrote: While I still think the name of this thread is weird as shit, it's a good idea. I'd love to hear what others think of my stories, or eh... story for now, wether it's what's good about it or what I have to improve on. I'm personally also very critical, so I'm completely fine with it if you give harsh feedback. We need to hear about what we do badly to improve it after all.

I think this is probably the last time I'm going to rewrite my story, as whenever I write something and look back on it, I'm usually not very satisfied and want to scrap it and start over, which results in me not getting anything done. Having feedback from an outside source helps a lot, as hereby I know wether it's good or not. However, as I stated, I won't be rewriting anymore. If a character you like dies you'll have to deal with it, or if there's something specific about my writing you dislike, then I can try to improve that in upcoming chapters. But I won't go back and change things (outside of spelling and grammar errors of course, which would also be helpful if pointed out) as it's also not very realistic, a show wouldn't just go back and change released episodes when people dislike them.

But enough about my story, I believe it's entirely fair that if you give me feedback I return the favor. So which of your stories would you recommend I read first? I'm not that good at expressing my thoughts about things like this, but I'll try and give you a detailed review of each chapter on Discord. Very understandable, I'll respect all creative choices made, unless the logic behind them just doesn't click with me. In which case, I'll present my argument for why my criticism is valid (not forcing you to change or rewrite anything btw), and I'd like you to convince me why that story beat (character death, development, plot twist, etc.) is good. I'm all ears for being wrong because I want the best experience possible out of reading these stories. I will make initial criticisms towards what I see are flaws, and either help you out, or ask for an explanation on why what I see as a flaw, is actually a very good story beat.

As for which of my stories I'd like you to review... I'd enjoy my story Dark Days. You can check out the main page [//thewalkingdeadfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Dark_Days https://thewalkingdeadfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Dark_Days] at that link, and there is a non-spoiler link right at the header that takes you to the first episode. There are currently eight episodes released right now, and episodes nine and ten are both in development. I'm happy towards any and all feedback, and if possible, I'd love for individual episodic feedback, but if you'd prefer to do one big review en masse of all eight episodes, I'm fine with that too.

Would you please provide me the link to Episode 1/Chapter 1 of the story you'd like me to review? As I said in Discord, I'll check out Dark Days as soon as I can, I was actually planning on reading that one anyway. I'll send you episodic reviews as there's not a lot of them.

Here's a link to the first, and currently only episode of my story: First Blood (Monsters)