Thread:DAKINGINDANORF/@comment-28969910-20160812162147/@comment-32522349-20160821042746

Ok, cool, I think you should break up the wall of texts you have on the page, for example... when you have some dialogue, break it up so it's easier to read. A good thing to do would be to go through your writing again and do some capitilization and punctuation, and breaking up the text like I mentioned before.