Thread:KeepOnKeepingOn/@comment-5546472-20190827001334

''"You can't just go and give me the roundabout, Caroline!" Dahlia shouts.''

So, "The Roundabout", is really good. Despite not much happening action wise, it was much less slow in terms of pacing. It's clear that this second was more about characterization and it succeeded well. I love that it was able to be still and just have the characters breathe. It's the type of writing that I envy. Granted, I feel like Caroline is being a massive idiot to just up and leave after ONE guy died, but that's just me nitpicking and it's still easy to her point. Another thing I sort of have a problem with is that in some scenes, a lot of characters are being mentioned and it can get confusing as to whom I'm following, even when it clearly says which character is doing what. That's often why I feel like when you have a lot of characters in a story, sometimes you've got keep them in smaller groups, that way it's easier to keep track of who's doing what.

And it could've done with some more Gina, but again, that's just me. I still really liked this. I'm looking forward to episode three. I'm hoping someone punches Jackson in the face. 