Thread:KeepOnKeepingOn/@comment-5546472-20190824222739

I was unsure as to where to post feedback on Dark Days, so I'm doing it here. As of right now, I've only read the first episode, "One Short Day", and I'm going to give me feed back episodically and not read ahead, so as to get a feel on each episode on it own terms. When you're offically done with the first season, I'll also probably give you feedback on the season as whole. With that said, here's what I have to say on "One Short Day".

There is not much to complain about. While this first episode is not perfect, it still works well. I got a good feeling on most of the characters for the most part. I really liked Warren's dynamics with both Raye and Dahlia, though when we first meet Dahlia, the dialogue is a bit cheesy.

I also found Warren's diary entry a bit too expositional, but given the format, I can't really figure out away on how to discuss that in natural conversation, so not too bad. I really like Gina. She definitely seems like someone you'd need in the zombie apocalypse given how she's just willing to literally kick in their ankles.

I'm also a bit confused as to how the walkers that bit Timmons managed to get into the school, I hope that's addressed later on. Honestly, though, this felt like a solid first episode. The plot felt a bit too slow, but it makes senses as this is only the first entry and I at least get the idea of where this story might be going. And I found no minor infractions, like spelling errors. I really liked the episode. Can't wait to read more.  