Talk:The Rise (TC)/@comment-24596982-20181129210259/@comment-36716365-20181129211553

Honestly I understand, I may not be the best writer out there. I wrote the story as just a little thing. I was never going to post it but I did to get some feedback. It took so long because I would forget about it alot. In the future I will spend alot more time going over it and making it better and longer.